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| goth_girl 2006-10-17 ch 9, anon. | abusegreat story keep going... |
| Lisaxo 2006-10-17 ch 9,  | abuseThis is such a great story! |
| Death'sBestFriend 2006-10-17 ch 9, | abusehey cant wait for the next chapter |
| Death'sBestFriend 2006-09-21 ch 8, | abusehey i cant wait to read the second chapter but i do have a word of advice. you should make your chapters longer and update soon i dont kno how long i can take the suspence |
| Tryphosa Constance 2006-08-24 ch 8, | abuseLe dum dum dum! Awesomeness lovie! Keep writing! I know where you live! Though I'd never dare step in your house... heh... |
| Sarah Sidle 2006-08-15 ch 7, | abuseVery, Very good romantic chapter! |
| ebonydragon 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI love it! But just a little correction...she tells him her name, and then she asks him how he knows her name? Anyways, this is great! |
| Sarah Sidle 2006-08-08 ch 6, | abuseGive her some more girlpower. Whose Hecate? Damon is cute, I like lycans. I'm going to put you on my favorites list! |
| Sarah Sidle 2006-08-08 ch 5, | abuseI like this chapter very much! I love your choice of names. Why don't you give Demetry a more old fashioned British accent (Like Spike from Buffy the vampire slayer.) |
| Sarah Sidle 2006-08-08 ch 4, | abuseWhat bloodtest? Did I miss something? Leukemia, that's a heavy topic. Why not give her aenemia. I think I know where this is heading. Love to read more. |
| Sarah Sidle 2006-08-08 ch 3, | abuseHow rude to read her mind like that. she should learn to block him. |
| Sarah Sidle 2006-08-08 ch 2, | abuseI smell a hint of Underworld. Still very much original. You could add some more detail, but I love it anyway! |
| Sarah Sidle 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseI like your vampire and his name. Nice first chapter! I'm going to review every one of them. Do you have a Beta? |
| whateva123 2006-08-08 ch 5, | abusei really think this story is very nice.please do update fast |
| Leila 2006-08-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseI just wanted to say I love your stories!! I hope to reed alot more |