"God can give him forever, but can't guarantee/That the thing that he waits for, the thing he's becoming/Will make him as happy as he thinks he'll be." True wisdom, that!

Gorgeous piece, though a little repetitive. It's pretty, wonderful rhythmn and rhyme. All I can think of is to describe that man. But it's great, no matter.

I wonder . . . is he looking for a lost dream?

You have quite an interesting style yourself! Oh, and on "My Choice" Yes you can believe in science, but the Bible in Genesis clearly states how everything was created! ^.^ Thank you!!

Very nice job! :-)

There is a good flow to it meaning the rhyming lines often have the same number of syllables, which gives it a good rhytme.

And always a plus when people can actually make stuff rhyme (say for a few times where 'it' rhymed 'it').

The answer can be so much. He could wait for love, which would be an obvious choice, but it could also be something else. In fact it could, as I see it, also be used in Breath and with reference to immortality or Myronia. It could be so many things he wait for.

I see it as love, but acknowledge it could be other stuff.

Anyway, nice flow and nice (again) to see a poem that is... a poem!