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| Syn871 2008-07-06 ch 7,  | abuseAh, the constant flirting... Haha. The funniness of it. Oh, look, I just invented a word! But yes, Lucy can be a playful jerk (Yes, I nicknamed hum Lucy). I like him. And you left it at a semi-cliffhanger! Ugh. :] |
| boredbottom 2008-07-01 ch 7, | abuseThe surprise her gave her wasn't what I expected. hehe evne thogh this chapter wasn't as long as the last one I liked it ! it showed their relationship with each other ... UPDATE SOON! |
| Syn871 2008-06-20 ch 6, | abuseAmazing chapter. Had me giggling. :] Great work. Sorry for my late answer. I actually think I died and came back to life but my computer's fixed. That's good, right? Now I can answer without disturbances. |
| boredbottom 2008-06-19 ch 6, | abuseyayayayay! the chapter has come at last! why does evrey author always leave readers wondering.. (Sigh) gr! UPDATE SOON! Ill be uh-way-tee-ing |
| boredbottom 2008-05-28 ch 5, | abusewhat!? Luce lives next door..o theres going to be some D-R_A-M-A! update! asap or whenever hehehhe ill be here waiting |
| Syn871 2008-05-28 ch 5, | abuseThis chapter was really enjoyable. I would've been really embarrassed if I had walked right by his house and never notice it was his. Hahaha. Luce trying to get her alone on a date was especially fun. :] Lovely story you've got here. |
| boredbottom 2008-05-27 ch 4, | abuse(sigh) Where's Luce? He was only in the story for a second(pouts)hahah oh well keep on writing. update update update! -magaly |
| Syn871 2008-05-27 ch 4, | abuseI love this chapter! :] Luce sounds amazing, a really sweet guy. Owen's just over-reacting. I really enjoy the close relationships you give to your characters, makes it all the more "breakable." That sounds sad, though. |
| Pinky Green 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI think you might want to work on your tense, because sometimes you write with present tense and past tense in a paragraph at the same time. Pinky_x |
| boredbottom 2008-05-25 ch 3, | abuseWRITE THE NEXTCHAPTER! haha Luce good or bad news? hm |
| xFantasyStarx 2008-05-24 ch 2, | abuseHey! Love the story, its really good and you should really continue the story! |
| Syn871 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseYou seem to add a lot of the cafe-setting-thing... Does that make sense? LOL Although most of my most recent, current fictions aren't posted here, the symbloism of coffee and coffee shops are used a lot. Love it, though. Your writings are great as ever, too. |
| Elgeria 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseHey i like it so far, good job :) -milz |
| SKD 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abusehey nice story keep going! i just wrote my first fictionpress story and i know how important reviews are. keep up the good work! |