um, more...please?...

Okay, so this seems really interesting so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. Good work with this so far.

WHAT!? Don't stop there! This is a real interesting beginning. The summary just dragged me into this and I started reading. I really like it so far. But the only problem is that... you left me hanging )): Haha. UPDATE SOON!

Very nice start so far and I can't believe you are leaving us hanging!! lol update SOON!

*squeebles!* You're writing again! I like how it starts, even if it is a bit short. So tell me, any bits of reality tucked in there? We all know how much that happens... I can't wait to see the rest of this, if it ever comes. You've left me in a cliff hanger moment and I wanna see what happens next!

Nice way of ending it, it really makes me anxious to see what happens next. This has potential and I'd love to see you update!