Reviews for The Creature Below

telepop
2008-04-07
ch 1,

abuseO tricky. What is it supposed to be? Skin of steel and tin, wow I can't think of anything like that.

Leaving Here
2006-07-16
ch 1,

abuseHi. goog peom all in all.thanks for the review. yes, the devotion could have turned out better... i totally agree with that...anyway, i hope to get more devotion thingys out, bc well, i love God, and thats pretty much all.

but thanks for the review! i needed some constructive critism, really. cuz, ppl just go: good job. and im like so... what should i do to make it better...well, thanks.~Liz

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