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| Warg 2006-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseI come to this last for it stands closest to me. Have i read something that has been so heartfelt for me, i do not know for sure, but the answer, i believe, is no. In its evocative turns and little nooks of sharp twinging descriptive gold and the flow chiming, crystal clear yet painful, i found myself reading this over and over. Even with my worries at rest this was nothing short of real for me. Melded with such longing, so strong yet vulnerable.. Thank you for this. And for being such a dear friend. .. |
| a lonely september 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseohmygod. this is so wonderful. i really like it, mostly because it reminds me of someone & something so similar to this... the feeling of longing in this poem is ohso sad... i really like this poem tho, it's so nicely written. |
| Let It Rain 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseExcellent, very excellent. I think a lot of people can relate to this. |
| tasted like heartache 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuse:) you make me smile |
| ItalianBellaGabi 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. I loved the locket and the end quote."but the empty locket is justcarved metaland space in betweendangling on a chain as itw a i t sto be filled.so it can be meaningful."It's good to make the last line something that the reader will take with him/her and you did that. Good job. |