Good chapter.

~Twilight Starr~

That emailing process had to be awkward. ;)

~Twilight Starr~

Nice chapter.

~Twilight Starr~

Vassar and a scholarship? That's nice. I wish something like that would happen to me. The letter was very well written and believable for it as in it sounding formal.

~Twilight Starr~

Good conversation. 90% is a B- at my school so Isabella wouldn't be a A student.

~Twilight Starr~

Nice conversation between friends.

~Twilight Starr~

Great character descriptions. It looks like this is going to be an interesting story.

~Twilight Starr~

i really like how things are told in emails, letters, im conversations, the way teenagers' lives are told today. it's so accurate and interesting, and a wonderful way to present this story. another great chapter,

honorata

hehe, what a nice chapter! have i said this before, that i really like your penname? because i do. actually rather jealous for you to take it before i did...heh. eager for more,

honorata

oh dear! i missed a lot! colleges and letters and scholarships, oh my! this story still definitely has me interested. can't wait to see what happens next,

yours, etc.

i liked your choices for the girls' screennames, very chuckle-worthy. though rather short, i enjoyed the style of this chapter, and can see now into the relationships between courtney and isabella. happy writing,

honorata

intriguing introduction, i get a good sense of the characters already. i'll be looking for more,

honorata