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| Semperfi1994 2006-08-01 ch 2, | abuseVery interesting. I thought it was slightly rushed but other than that it was fine. Keep writing! |
| Hug a Tree 2006-07-31 ch 2, | abuseo. i really like it so far. the mysterious hero. haha. it's lovely. i can't wait for more! =) |
| DisturbedKittenWriter 2006-07-31 ch 2, | abuseShort chapter..huh? lol! It is still an excelent chapter, though. I love it :) I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep going! Wishing you tasty ice cream,~Kitty |
| Nyptunus 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseOMT...this is awesome! It's so intense and I wonder who grabbed her! -shakes- hury up with more chappies! I have to know what happens! Nari doesn't die I hope ):..well of course not, it's only the first chapter. I wonder if she meets mermaids o_o. Anyways fluffly chocolate covered little gummy snakes, white chocolate bunny paws, and crossaints (sp?) smothered in butter, ~SJ~ |
| DisturbedKittenWriter 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuse*makes "o"ing noises* Very good! Nice cliff hanger and descriptions! I can't wait to read more, so keep writing! Wishing you peaceful sleep and yummy candy cars, ~Kitty |