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| akaCHEEKS 2008-08-11 ch 20,  | abusei'm just wondering, when are you going to update this story again? its really a good and would such a waste if you didn't continue it.. honestly, i don't think its getting enough attention that it really deserves. other people should read this story more often! victor is really funny man. |
| RebelVampire 2008-01-06 ch 20, | abuseGo Hunter and Christian! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE I DONT THINK I CANT WAIT THAT LONG |
| j.m.burford 2007-11-26 ch 20, | abuseoh I really enjoyed the first book... Victor seems more childish in this book and he's not as sexy now that he isn't a vampire and is naive... but I still love him. Im hoping that you will update soon because I would hate it if this was one of those stories that never got finished...:'( |
| Serolina 2007-10-18 ch 20, | abuseOH NOES! that can't be good...shouldn't Christian have healed quickly though? damn...shau is back. poor tally. can't wait to find out what will happen! |
| Shadow Creature 2007-10-18 ch 20, | abuseYay Indy! That was awesome! i like your story, it's cool. Hi Victor! I don't know what you should be for halloween, but if i think of something i'll let you know! |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-10-18 ch 20, | abuseJust for some irony here...how about a VAMPIRE? |
| Bravado Pirate 2007-10-17 ch 20, | abuseVictor, you are a sexy **, ya know that? Of course you do. But that doesn't mean people will bow down to you. ARG, I dunno where this story is headed, but its amazing as every chapter gets posted. I love the Huter/Christian action. It's so cute! Lovely triple-hybrid-free-dive-plunge-cannonball-of-doom going on there. Bwah. |
| atreyu love 2007-10-16 ch 20, | abuseOHMYGOSH. DRAMA!! HIS SISTER! so why is she evil? EHH? or was she resurrected?? m?? WEL, PLEASE UPDATE! |
| amo angel324 2007-10-16 ch 20, | abusethis is so good! |
| vaush 2007-10-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh I forgot... I think he should be... a... witch. ahahaah. just to mock Juni. it'd be funny. or else... umm.. a frog... or a ninja... he'd have fun with that atleast... or a turtle... or a mutant... or a teenage mutant ninja turtle... or... a pumpkin. OMG A PUNPKIN. lmfao. He'd be all ROUND. |
| vaush 2007-10-15 ch 20, anon. | abuseo.o eerk. ahaha the little girl SCARES ME! It scares jay too! ahaha. SHE'S HOORRIBLE! o.o um... yah I love hunter and Christian together. Real cute. I wanna do somthing with our characters in it to but I don't have anything it would work in... concidering most of my other stories are either in the past or in another dimension... NO! *dies* umm... I'm so glad you updated though! MORE *dies* |
| she's so hardcore 2007-10-15 ch 20, | abuseHe should totally be a transvestite ninja pirate with a god complex and blue hair. That would be AWESOME. Too bad I can't draw it. ~j. lynn |
| atreyu love 2007-09-02 ch 19, | abuseso im wondering what ever happened to Evance. Nothing was said about him after he left, so im just wonderign now :) please update! im loving the story. and im totally wondering whose baby Juni is carrying. i REALLY hope its Victor's. |
| grumps 2007-08-29 ch 19, anon. | abusehave mercy! that't the first time I've ever read MM style...I liked it. WHen are we gonna learn more about the origins of the baby? I'm dyin to know. |
| akaCHEEKS 2007-08-23 ch 18, | abuseaaww.. at least they're getting closer again. but i'd really like to see victor go back to being a vampire.. he's too sensitive now.. haha.. |