I like this one too :) Keep it up! heh not like i need to tell you

if you're asking if I'm better off without you, than the answer is no because you are a highly welcomed reviewer. if you're wondering if you're corrupting my world, then no. I've corrupted it far more than you ever will. ^_^ i like it. it's short sweet and to the point

Short and simple as you put. But nice too. It doesn't exactly carry the emotions told within it, but tells them divinely in short sweet words.

Ah.. damn. Nice piece you got here, I write poetry myself on fanfiction.net, and I really enjoyed reading this. Also, I wanted to say thank you for reading a poem of mine, you said you'd be happy to read the story when it came out, =) thanks, well the story is up. Two are actually, they're both about the same charcacters (penname) Kimar, and TempusTooShort, are writing about, I hope you check them out, I'd love to know what you think!Anyways, this poem's got some deep emotion and insecurity in it, I wanted to say doubt but I'm not sure... It's really good!Take care.♪Willow Wildfire♪

This was a very nice poem. I liked how you expressed everything in so little words, it was beautiful.

Also thanks for the reviewCriti-sized

I like the italic thingy a lot

I love it. and i like the effect the italicized words give.