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| Noir Fleurir 2007-02-01 ch 1,  | abuseI like this one too :) Keep it up! heh not like i need to tell you |
| Nathan Ridge 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseif you're asking if I'm better off without you, than the answer is no because you are a highly welcomed reviewer. if you're wondering if you're corrupting my world, then no. I've corrupted it far more than you ever will. ^_^ i like it. it's short sweet and to the point |
| Mosaic Stains 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abuseShort and simple as you put. But nice too. It doesn't exactly carry the emotions told within it, but tells them divinely in short sweet words. |
| Willow Wildfire 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuseAh.. damn. Nice piece you got here, I write poetry myself on fanfiction.net, and I really enjoyed reading this. Also, I wanted to say thank you for reading a poem of mine, you said you'd be happy to read the story when it came out, =) thanks, well the story is up. Two are actually, they're both about the same charcacters (penname) Kimar, and TempusTooShort, are writing about, I hope you check them out, I'd love to know what you think!Anyways, this poem's got some deep emotion and insecurity in it, I wanted to say doubt but I'm not sure... It's really good!Take care.♪Willow Wildfire♪ |
| criti-sized 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very nice poem. I liked how you expressed everything in so little words, it was beautiful. Also thanks for the reviewCriti-sized |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI like the italic thingy a lot |
| Expression07 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI love it. and i like the effect the italicized words give. |