Oh wow! That was so amazing! And so true, for me. I loved the last verse, and your imagery is so awesome! I mean, I've read poems about slipping away before, but with nothing about finding a sanctuary and a painless, numb existence (which sounds so amazing!). Awesome awesome awesome job!

I really like this one too. It's something that I can really relate to. You did a really great job on this.

Beautifully written. I can relate. The imagery was excellent and the emotions were expressed flawlessly!
Great job!

OMG! again...amazing...your really really good! great imagrey! over all its amazing!

it was dark and deep and that made it very very good. i liked your words they seemed to make it more real.