The title just caught me. So I had to read it. I'm glad I did.

The whole thing really is great. I'm not going to lie to you. I loved it. +fav story! For your second jorio, this rocks! And even if it weren't a jorio, it would rock anyway. I'm jealous, very, very jealous.

I can't choose a fav line, because it all flows together so nicely ...

Felicia.

I enjoyed reading this one. "An inkweb spider" is lovely imagery. A good poem indeed.