The first thing I was going to say was something about how it's been a year since the first chapter. Then I realized that I hadn't posted on this website in nearly as long, so never mind. ;)

Good chapter. I hope you update more frequently because this is really a good story. There is a lot of potential here, and you could do a lot with it.

KD

Omg I just noticed Akira = kira + A He can kill people with his deathnote!

Umm, Akira doesn't act like he's 16 or 17... He acts more like young Al...

“We both are after the same goal.”

“Don’t say that makes us friends.”

“No it makes us allies!”

“More like enemies.”

“We could travel together!”

“I work alone.”

That's pretty sweet. When you gonna update? Huh? Huh?

Wow. This review was so... unedited. Shame on me.

*snicker* Akira seems like me.

... very strange in my opinion. Hard to tell who's speaking at some points then you figure it out with the next few lines. I had to go back though and read it again when I realized who was speaking.

I don't like this very much... -w- well.. it's ...uh the same as water mage.. -w- l-3-l we bwahahaha -Miru Von Lunar.

A Japanese name like YOU ALWAYS USE, Nikooru!! Well... I only had one problem with this story. TOO MANY TALKINGS! and quatation marks... I would I have liked it better if you putted a picture on it also. That would be pretty cool.

I hope you update it, sounds funny, and Akira is so cute! Rengawa seems paranoid..

It was interesting are you going to tie this story in with Water Mage.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~