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Laughing In the Night 2008-08-29 ch 6,	abuseMostly, I can feel the pain when I read this. Regrets.
Laughing In the Night 2008-08-29 ch 1,	abuseOuch. Talk about depression.
Juni 2008-04-21 ch 6,	abuseI love each and every one of these.
ellie and bananas 2007-07-25 ch 6,	abusei see myself in this so much it makes me want to cry. i haven't written in about a year, and this makes me want to start again, to express everything that's happened in the past year where i've changed and grown more than i ever have in my life. you have a way with words unrivaled by anyone i've ever encountered. i read and re-read this at least three times, and every time finding something new and heartbreaking and real. i just want you to know this is incredible.
createanarchy 2007-04-09 ch 1,	abusei think a hundred girls should be saying thank you to this and i'm one as well. it's amazing that you can put something so sad and hurtful and just plain nasty in to these six amazing chapters. this is deffo going to be something i read more then once. and your not the only one that likes to keep their socks on, one place thats only urs i hope you are ok x
notthecreepyfatguy 2006-12-13 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is...all I can say is that this is amazing. The best thing (or the only thing) about bad experiences is that they make great poetry. You are definatly proof of that.
axis.on.a.tilt 2006-11-18 ch 1,	abuseagain, your imagery is so real that it's making me get goosebumps. It's always nice yet frightening when you can relate so closely to other people's experiences. WAK
kindred spirit 2006-11-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseI get it. Very true.
simpleplan13 2006-10-28 ch 6,	abuseI don't need lullaby's anymore... i dont think it should be possesive I like this a lot... and although Im sad there wont be more its a perfect ending... the comparing your childhood to you now with the vodka bottles and the end about living happily after and epilogue just close it very bittersweet like the whole collection
simpleplan13 2006-10-28 ch 5,	abuseI like the story.. the whole being adults vs. children and the how it focused on you but still ended with them... beautifully written... one thing that I thought the whole time was that condoms expire... but thats just 'cause my mind is weird
by His blood 2006-10-28 ch 4,	abusegod now i feel horrible about what i said earlier about how normally i wouldn't feel sorry for you. let me clarify that, please. you are not like the people i know. you are beautiful and you wrote this beautifully and i could never judge / hate / envy you for any of this. if you were like the people at my high school, maybe. but god, you're so different, this is (you are) gorgeous and i'm sorry if you misinterpreted what i said.
by His blood 2006-10-28 ch 3,	abusei love the way you tie in your childhood and the idea of lost innocence into this. god, this is just so raw and seething and screaming and painful and , it just kills me. this is amazing and incredible and it just KILLS me. you are beautiful.
by His blood 2006-10-28 ch 2,	abusei've read every chapter of this collection so many times, but every time i was left speechless and broken and out of breath and didn't know what i could say. there's nothing i can say. considering that for about six months last year one of my best friends kept telling me i was disgusting and no one would ever want me, and that this year someone is basically saying the same thing, and also considering the fact that i haven't been wanted or touched at all, normally i wouldn't feel sorry for you at all. i'm the type of person who gets jealous easily and disguises the hurt with self-loathing and hatred towards the ones who have everything i know i'll never have. but how could i hate you for this? this is you raw and real and it's written beautifully and i admire you so, so much for doing this. it's an excellent exorcism, like someone else said -- this is amazing. the rawness, , it's incredible. just from reading your writing, i know you're an amazing person. you are beautiful. and i could never judge you for this. if you flaunted it, maybe, if you were like the people at school and the girl i love, then maybe i could have an excuse to hate you for this. normally i could say something to the effect of, obviously you're pretty enough to be , get over it. BUT THAT'S NOT WHAT I'M SAYING HERE AT ALL. i'm saying that NORMALLY, i wouldn't feel sorry for you at all. and this isn't 'feeling sorry' -- this is admiring you for your courage and your beauty and your raw ability to make something like this cut through me even though my experiences are far different. this is just so powerful, it hits so hard and leaves me speechless. what can i say after reading something like this? despite my personal , how could i judge you? how could anyone judge you? this entire collection is incredible. and i'm sorry for reviewing this so late but i honestly couldn't think of anything to say. and a lot of this hurts me and left me shaking with the hurt because, the girl i love did a lot of and would always talk about it while i was right there and it hurt me so bad, it hurt so ** much. anyway i'm rambling but how could i not when this is so raw and beautiful and amazing? i'm sorry if i offended you by saying if you were anyone else, i wouldn't feel sorry for you. what i'm saying is, this is written in a way that i can tell you're beautiful, that i can tell you're different from the brain-dead people at my high school and i can tell from your writing that you're gorgeous in more ways than what everyone seems to care about most. if you managed to get through this review thank you.
Opium Hex 2006-10-28 ch 1,	abuseOh holy ** ! This aches and burns it's way across the page. No judgement, but plenty of empathy.
not sure yet 2006-10-24 ch 3,	abuseit's interesting how feet can be portrayed as so vulnerable, their such a weird body part, i dunno, another very charming and bitter poem, i heart it hardcore...

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