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Reviews For: The Broken Smile

Leaving Here
2006-11-05
ch 1,
abusehmm...im heading to church in like 30 minutes and this is not what i need on my ming... oh well.

despite the theme of this, i really like who you wrote it. i love how you told it from like his feel... great!

Liz
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