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| ChildeOfChaos 2007-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseNice work! Now I have this ominious picture of the universe waiting in some dark corner(which doesn't make sense cause how can the universe fit in a corner?? Oh well, that the picture in my head) waiting to suck me in. Its kind of disturbing :) I liked the third and fourth stanzas the best. |