Sad, but pretty. I like the "don't worry- the sky is crying for you today." (Probably because I love the rain.) Anyway, great job.

(P.S. Thanks for the reviews, they're much appreciated.)

This is a well-written short poem which clows from one line to the next. A little obscure in subject matter, but that isn't a criticism; poetry is sometimes that way. It sounds like the lyrics to one of thos gothic metal bands that are dotted all over the world.

Remy

Wow. You really have a way with words. This poem is really good. Kudos~!Nick!~

nice i like it