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Poena Sensus 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abuseWOW -I like this infact i think i will make it into a musical, yes that sounds like a wonderfyul idea
ChildeOfChaos 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was really morbid but I liked it a lot. Your description gave me chills. I loved the contrast here. On one hand you have this girl committing suicide which is something bloody (obviously here it is) and serious and all that. Then on the other hand you have this crazy girl that seems so innocent and there's a sort of peaceful feel from her perspective. Great job, this was an awesome piece.
Hope AND Misery 2006-09-26 ch 1,	abusecan I just say thi9s one thing...I'm freaking twiching in the freaking corner! huggs and stroking Zuko plushiI love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko! I love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko! I love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko! I love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko! I love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko! I love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko! I love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko! I love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko! I love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko! I love You Zuko, I'm safe with you Zuko!
ObssessionKillsMany 2006-07-27 ch 1,	abuseEmily: Why does a mental patiant have a pocket knife? Allie: They let me have one! Emily: Explain to me how you are not a goth. Allie: Pink is prettier than black! Emily: (Twitch)
Talyth 2006-07-17 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is very vivid and powerful. You have a gift for description; the piece really pulls the reader in. Hah, I'm gonna have nightmares O_o Great job! -Devon
The Melissa Occult 2006-07-17 ch 1,	abuseVery good story. I found it humorous, even if no one else does. Gory, yes, you might want to raise the rating so little kids don't read it. (then again, I don't guess it matters, they see it all on the tele anyways. I hope I never have children, I hate the little brats.) I'm curious as to whether the different parts of your body make noise when you cut them? I don't know from experience, and I'm a generally happy person, so I'm not going to go try it. but I'm still very curious, do you have a cadavar in your house you'd be willing to mail me? I really did like the character though, this really could become part of a bigger story if you wanted it to. Maybe change the end of this a little and you could use it for the ending of a story about a girl who final turns into this. I very much enjoyed the quotes on your site. :) The one warranted some strange looks in class. What did the teacher say? Sincerely your's, Ellen the Thoughtless & TMO
Aryanda 2006-07-17 ch 1,	abuseWOW-- that gave me goosebumps, it was really amazing!! I didn't think I could read one for a bit, but I was so compelled because the writing is just so good!! Interesting idea too-- and nice elaboration with the descriptions (even though they did freak me out!) All in all, GREAT job!!

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