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Reviews For: snowballs & playboys

thursdays and rain
2007-07-27
ch 1,
abuselovelylovely
lovelikeamixtape
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abusethis is way beautiful. it's like a breath of fresh air. favorites.
Aquafied
2006-08-07
ch 1,
abusewill take on a meaningthat only we willunderstand-dont you just love that about music, sometimes. no, not really.

interesting
WiltingBlackRose
2006-07-24
ch 1,
abuseAww that was so sweet.

Made me smile.
wordsworth in a garbage can
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abuseyou are, just, incredible. everything's so descriptive and so detailed and so realistic. it goes like a story almost. and you're the only person i know that could pull off that ginsberg & kerouac & buddha then postheavymetalhardpunkrock so well.
poetic abortion
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abuseIt is fabulous, simply put. And the metaphor . . . Oh God, you make teen-romance seem like it had a chance (except, you know, not) with the way you write; it feels like summer and love and it doesn't seem cheesy and dully concocted. It seems real and pretty and - did I mention how real this feels? I swear I could just look outside my window and see it there, in full-blown glory, happening. Itissopretty.

~* Noelle
shelina
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abusethis is amazing, omg. beautiful descriptions and the emotions are very clear. for some reason i dont like the "one" at the end though, but the poem is still really really well written.
clockwork Kiss
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abusecute. it is the epitome of teen love. i like the souvenir comparison idea, it's definitely a good metaphor for young romance. possiblye a perfect one. the emphasis on the &s is nice and gives it a hopeful feeling of continuation. very cool piece, the emotion really comes through.

-mindy
Second-Hand-Screamo
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abuseOne word for this marvelously worded, image-filled, beautiful piece:

Woah.

mercury.love
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. I love it. I can't think of anything to say and "& everything is infinitehopefulpossiblelike we arewhenwearetogether

one." completely gorgeous perfection. One for the favorites list.
Whoregasmic
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abusethis is amazing and simplelike summer-loveand things that dont mean anythingto anyone but those who know what they mean. and bones touching and just skin to skin. love. its amazing.im star-struck by your brilliance!
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