 thursdays and rain 2007-07-27 . chapter 1lovelylovely |
 lovelikeamixtape 2006-08-22 . chapter 1this is way beautiful. it's like a breath of fresh air. favorites. |
 Aquafied 2006-08-07 . chapter 1will take on a meaningthat only we willunderstand-dont you just love that about music, sometimes. no, not really.
interesting |
 WiltingBlackRose 2006-07-24 . chapter 1Aww that was so sweet.
Made me smile. |
 wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-07-18 . chapter 1you are, just, incredible. everything's so descriptive and so detailed and so realistic. it goes like a story almost. and you're the only person i know that could pull off that ginsberg & kerouac & buddha then postheavymetalhardpunkrock so well. |
 poetic abortion 2006-07-18 . chapter 1It is fabulous, simply put. And the metaphor . . . Oh God, you make teen-romance seem like it had a chance (except, you know, not) with the way you write; it feels like summer and love and it doesn't seem cheesy and dully concocted. It seems real and pretty and - did I mention how real this feels? I swear I could just look outside my window and see it there, in full-blown glory, happening. Itissopretty.
~* Noelle |
 shelina 2006-07-18 . chapter 1this is amazing, omg. beautiful descriptions and the emotions are very clear. for some reason i dont like the "one" at the end though, but the poem is still really really well written. |
 clockwork kiss 2006-07-18 . chapter 1cute. it is the epitome of teen love. i like the souvenir comparison idea, it's definitely a good metaphor for young romance. possiblye a perfect one. the emphasis on the &s is nice and gives it a hopeful feeling of continuation. very cool piece, the emotion really comes through.
-mindy |
 Second-Hand-Screamo 2006-07-18 . chapter 1One word for this marvelously worded, image-filled, beautiful piece:
Woah.
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 mercury.love 2006-07-18 . chapter 1Beautiful. I love it. I can't think of anything to say and "& everything is infinitehopefulpossiblelike we arewhenwearetogether
one." completely gorgeous perfection. One for the favorites list. |
 Whoregasmic 2006-07-18 . chapter 1this is amazing and simplelike summer-loveand things that dont mean anythingto anyone but those who know what they mean. and bones touching and just skin to skin. love. its amazing.im star-struck by your brilliance! |