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| thursdays and rain 2007-07-27 ch 1,  | abuselovelylovely |
| lovelikeamixtape 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abusethis is way beautiful. it's like a breath of fresh air. favorites. |
| Aquafied 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abusewill take on a meaningthat only we willunderstand-dont you just love that about music, sometimes. no, not really. interesting |
| WiltingBlackRose 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseAww that was so sweet. Made me smile. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseyou are, just, incredible. everything's so descriptive and so detailed and so realistic. it goes like a story almost. and you're the only person i know that could pull off that ginsberg & kerouac & buddha then postheavymetalhardpunkrock so well. |
| poetic abortion 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseIt is fabulous, simply put. And the metaphor . . . Oh God, you make teen-romance seem like it had a chance (except, you know, not) with the way you write; it feels like summer and love and it doesn't seem cheesy and dully concocted. It seems real and pretty and - did I mention how real this feels? I swear I could just look outside my window and see it there, in full-blown glory, happening. Itissopretty. ~* Noelle |
| shelina 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abusethis is amazing, omg. beautiful descriptions and the emotions are very clear. for some reason i dont like the "one" at the end though, but the poem is still really really well written. |
| clockwork Kiss 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abusecute. it is the epitome of teen love. i like the souvenir comparison idea, it's definitely a good metaphor for young romance. possiblye a perfect one. the emphasis on the &s is nice and gives it a hopeful feeling of continuation. very cool piece, the emotion really comes through. -mindy |
| Second-Hand-Screamo 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseOne word for this marvelously worded, image-filled, beautiful piece: Woah. |
| mercury.love 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love it. I can't think of anything to say and "& everything is infinitehopefulpossiblelike we arewhenwearetogether one." completely gorgeous perfection. One for the favorites list. |
| Whoregasmic 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abusethis is amazing and simplelike summer-loveand things that dont mean anythingto anyone but those who know what they mean. and bones touching and just skin to skin. love. its amazing.im star-struck by your brilliance! |