|Reviews for Cat's Eye|
| J.L. Lofthouse 3/1/12 . chapter 1
Hey I have just read this and find it amazing. Where can I get your book?
| NinjaBaconShallRule 12/9/11 . chapter 23
I love the story so far! I actually started crying when crash said those harsh words to her,why cant they're happily ever ending come closer? :D
| BlueRyuu 8/13/10 . chapter 25
wow i have just loved the story so far X3 i originally came across it on your crystalmaiden site, but was reluctant to buy it (tbh the description wasn't all that enticing to me /shrugs) but was ecstatic to see it posted on here, even if in untweaked half-story form :) i'm definately going to buy tomorrow, thanks for leaving it posted!
in regards to the actual story, i really want to continue reading as soon as possible, will there be any great shift in jumping from this one at fictionpress to reading the published book? or is there maybe something greatly significant in the first book you would recommend me going back to read? :)
i await your response, and once again, thanks! .
| AranaBanana 10/20/09 . chapter 25
First of all, I hate you for stopping releasing the fic on FP at that moment. I mean, seriously, I was so looking forward to know what happens next! Now I'll have to wait a good month before I can read the end... (hopefully you are still selling the book because if not I'll throw a tantrum.)
Okay now that I'm done ranting, I guess I could start praising your work. Cuz well, I gotta admit I really enjoyed reading this so far. (I even planned on buying the book after a few chapters, but now it's more than just plans, it's what happens next.) So thanks a lot for writing this, and I hope you keep the good work up!
| simply amanda 11/21/08 . chapter 25
first off, i want to say a huge WOW! and THANK YOU! and CONGRATULAIONS!
reading this story has been ahmazing, to say the least, and you are definately an astounding writer (and I WILL be buying your book!)
I have so many theories about this story, it would probably take up three review boxes to write them all down (and i'm crunched for time!)
Your spelling and grammar are better than you give yourself credit for; only occasionally will you leave you a quotation mark or misplace a comma, however you always spell "heel" as "heal" and I thought I should let you know!
Anyway, I can't WAIT to read your other works and order this book as fast as I can! You are truly talented (:
ps: crash BETTER get a grip and fall in love with sora already, because I've been waiting for it to happen for half this story already!
| Doll-Fin-Chick 11/12/08 . chapter 6
I was right! I do love this story already...now all I have to do is finish it...hm...
| teknikalitiez 11/8/08 . chapter 25
I liked it! :)
| choc me 10/14/08 . chapter 1
There's a lot I'd like to say abt this story, but I dont think I'll be able to put all of them into words.
It's probably one of my all time favorites! Its weird how the first time I stumbled across this book on Fp, I read the first chapter and then decided it was too gore for me! I actually thought that Volcrian was the assassin mentioned in the summary, and he seemed way too much of psycho for me. But for some reason I came back to this story some time after, and I'm glad I did.
Hey u know, it's actually the first e-book I've bought! And it's been a great read; I'm sad it's over. I'll be sure to check out ur other stories on ur website. Just not now; my mind is still too wrapped up around cat's eye and reluctant to let go just yet.
I've really like ur representation of the characters; they became quite distinct, real persons in my mind. Dorian and Burn will hold a special place in my heart. sniff
I'm getting a bit teary-eyed here! Must be my hormones or something :S
Lastly, do u have any special songs that u associate with this book? I've been listening to "everywhere" by bran van 30, and "this kiss" by faith hill, constantly while reading cat's eye. And although these songs dont really match with fantasy, to me they just fit well, and I'm pretty much sure that even after a long time, hearing these songs will tug at something in my heart and I'll be reminded of Sora and Crash.
| Dani West 10/9/08 . chapter 1
Interesting start, I'll say that much. However, I think the characterization was a mite off. Of course, not much to be done now- it's published, right? Ah, well. Both characters introduced in this prologue seem have their traits and ideals shoved down the reader's throat; show, not tell.
I like the diction in some areas, though- particularly the paragraph "the boy looked at him for a long moment...". It flowed very nicely. All in all, your style is admirable, and it reads very well. Unfortunately, I wasn't all too gripped by the characters, and the prose is borderline purple. Maybe in time, eh? Congrats on being published.
| Paradigm08 8/25/08 . chapter 25
I was so impressed when I heard that this story turned into a book. A little late but CONGRATS! That must have felt great. I will have to get my hands on this book. I've read these earlier chapters a while ago before you came out for the book so I will have to go find it now so I can finally read the desired ending! hehe. A job well done. Fantastic story.
| Lulu Stories 6/11/08 . chapter 1
I really love this story it's got a really good the plot and I like how the love story isn't like some which is all pining and lusting which is great! Well done!
| Tor 6/1/08 . chapter 1
So far it seems intersting. I just had a problem with "Wolfy mage". It doesn't flow and honestly sounds kinda funny.
| Efreisone 3/24/08 . chapter 25
That's it? I just died a little inside.
Congrats on getting the story published, but you should definitely stick a disclaimer in the summary about not being able to finish Cat's Eye without purchase. I had planned on buying this once I'd finished the full story, but not being alerted to this problem in the first place has made me seriously consider just dropping it entirely.
| Efreisone 3/23/08 . chapter 17
I have to say, I absolutely adore this story. And I don't say that a lot... so be proud. The writing is excellent. Aside from a few random typos, I feel like I'm reading an actual professional, published work here.
I've also got to add that the way you keep the romantic thread subdued is really wonderful. Sora and Crash aren't spending the entire first half of the story pining for each other with dramatic inner monologue- I waited for it but it never popped up. It's so unbelievably refreshing.
| MZ PEACHESZZ 3/17/08 . chapter 1
Please update Luna Vis!
And this is one of my favorite stories on FP!