Kind of a slow start on this one, but one you pick up speed, it's really beautiful.

This is so ethereal and early-morning beautiful (for me, 10:20 a.m. is early...). The only thing that kind of turned me off is the link between the second and third lines "and/then". I don't know why, it sort of interrupted the flow, I guess. As always, though, just amazing. bella (Side note: Really, don't feel compelled to read my old stuff. I fully intend to delete it, I just have some odd attachment to it. When I get around to it though, more than half my stuff will be deleted, I think...x_x)