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shinco 2007-02-05 ch 1,	abuseDude, that was nice! lol I loved it! You're getting to be a better and better writer everyday! Just one constructive comment: in the first stanza, last line, between the words death and neither, you might want to add a semicolon. Gotta go now! GO SHAZAAM!
Femme de Dieu 2006-08-30 ch 1,	abuseThis is interesting. The first stanza seems to be talking about mankind in general, especially in light of recent newsworthy wars. As if there will never be an end to war, for neither side wants to give it up. "both on the brink of death neigher shall die." However, the second stanza for me seemed to change to a more peresonal battle. That we somehow always deign to do what we "should" versus what we "would" do...and if i might add...if only we "could." Quite an intriguing piece. Truly, Tourterelle
simpleplan13 2006-07-26 ch 1,	abuseinteresting and well done
classic violet 2006-07-25 ch 1,	abuse'both on the brink of death neither shall die' 'the would says “goodbye” to a simple waste' wow, this poem is so... enchanting. lovely job.
breezy nostrils 2006-07-24 ch 1,	abusem inner demons. i've been battling with them lately. nice work.
poetic abortion 2006-07-18 ch 1,	abuse"public watches the inner war consume you both on the brink of death neither shall die" - It sums it up so well; the battle as a metaphor for life (this whole thing really seems like a metaphor for life to me, at least). It is haunting, poignant and dramatic and that last line nearly gave me a heart-attachk. What else can I say that hasn't already been said? Itisbeyondfabulous. ~* Noelle
Ang-Dev 2006-07-18 ch 1,	abusehey shazaam! or should i call i tempest surge now? i am so sorry i havent reviewed in ages! this poem is brill btw. i totally loved the rhyming and continuous way it flows. interesting, keep up the fab work and have a lovely summer :D ~mez~ aka Ang/FunkyFlower14

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