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| ChildeOfChaos 2007-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseYour title really caught my attention and I'm gald I read it. The flow was a bit rough in places and some of the rhymes seemed forced, but I really enjoyed this one. I especially liked that last three stanzas. Nice. |