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| beatrice is hot 2006-08-09 ch 1,  | abuseIt is excellent that you are inspired by things like that. It's the mark of a really good person; I'm not nearly good enough to take something like that and want to write about it. You have a very rough, simple, specific style. I like it. |
| Socially-Awkward 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseBut where will we go in your time machine...? Back to the black belt test to relive the joy! I like the simplicity of this. It describes the scene without over describing it. Good work dottie |
| THE LAST zHERO 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abusewhy time machine? |