How original! I like this and think it could be the start of something very interesting. The two distinct dialects also lent it some humour.

Cute.

Lurvely. Nob and Disembodied Voice are both awfully funny, in their own speical ways, and that funniness made all the more pronounced thanks to the intellectual gap between the two.

Heh, I kept picturing Nob with this, "WTF?" look on his face. (Yeah, that was important.) Anywho, I hope you keep up with this one!

The whole idea for the story was very creative. Well done.