Bittersweet, and sad but I like it

It's heartbreaking how love blinds you. This is reality blended perfectly with insanity!

Thanks for the review, Jess

The contradiction works well in this. Shows the interactions of relationships accurately. Very relatable. Well done.

Cool.

Beatiful word placing.But the fifth line somewhat sounds out of place.'Enlightens' after 'which' or more close to the point 'tens' after 'ch'.I think soft words after heavy ones kills the rhytme of a poem(It maybe because of my pronouncing). Poems idea is a aestetic one.

wow, this poem had such a strong, yet delicate and dream-like touch to it. Okay, that sounds weird. what i mean is that the power and purpose of this poem is filled with strength, yet you feed your reader with soft and gentle words. Very nice. It paints a clear, sad picture in my mind. Keep up the colorful work, Raspberry Twirl.

p.s. thank you for your review!

oo! i like this one. it has a spevial quality to it... nice

~Liz

"with eyes like glass mirrors" What a quote that can mean so much. That she can really see that love is never forever. I liked the poem.

-duckmaster

Oo good one!

All of them are.

Katy

Interesting, nicely done.

About the reflections and refractions of human lies?

Very nice.

Keep writing

Alan.