Reviews for She Gets Her Revenge

Siorindel Silvanesti 2006-10-21 ch 2,	I noticed that while the story is interesting, the chapters are far shorter than i would have thought. It might be good to draw on Roger Zelansky's To Reign In Hell, another pre-creation biblical story, that you can use as a reference point for your writing. Otherwise, I would say that you might want to give background info, such as the Transference of Power Scene, and the Entry Upon Earth scene. For this story to have a real cohesiveness, you need to use more imagery and explanation. Otherwise, I would give you a 'good' rating for your story. Go work it over a bit, and it'll go somewhere. Sincerely, Siorindel Silvanesti
Narita 2006-09-10 ch 2,	Eek, I hope the main character doesn't make a bad decision.
Lady Carmilla Sanguina 2006-08-08 ch 1,	Wow, this is dark. But I like it. Aw, what? I really wanted God to, what was it? Swoop down and carry everyone up to Heaven. Lmao.
Narita 2006-08-06 ch 1,	"It is Janurary 9th, the year 30, a.e.. After Earth" My birthday yo! Oh yeah, this is very scary. I don't like the situation at all but it's very interesting. Almost like an apocylptic horror movie. More please!