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| Trisagian 2007-01-21 ch 2,  | abuseUhm, this is good, but at the end, shouldn't it be a 180 turn, not a 360? |
| snowystarshine 2006-09-04 ch 6, | abuseLol. Alexis likes Amethyst. Amethyst is a drunkard! Kazuki likes Amethyst. WHat's next! lol. Keep the great stuff up! ~SD |
| snowystarshine 2006-08-29 ch 5, | abuseYay, good chapter. Do it again! Marbles the cat! |
| snowystarshine 2006-08-25 ch 4, | abuseHey. Short chapter this time but that's okay. Lol, the dancing part is in there. Hope the nest chapter comes in soon. |
| snowystarshine 2006-07-27 ch 2, | abuseGood introduction to Amethyst. This is well written, Kiz. Expecting a chapter as good as this one next time around. Oh yeah, FULL THROTTLE! lol. ~Keiya |
| WriterEsque 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI agree with the person below me, it was written very nicely. I'm going to add you to my Author Alert list to keep up with this story. It's got good potential. |
| snowystarshine 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written, I like it! |
| bakalakadaka 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, not bad.I like the story so far.But, wouldn't dragging the girl along make Alexis seem guilty as well? |