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| DepressionDevil 2006-08-23 ch 1,   | Are there words to bring enough praise to this wonderful, painful poem? It's so much all at once, I cannot even begin to surface the emotions this brought to light inside my heart. I've been through what you describe in your profile, more than I'd like to discuss now. However, this poem is...truly vigorous from overcoming pain. I interpreted this as a reference to what one can do to another from unconscious pain and frost. I truly find myself in this, more on the overcoming the frost and pain before fate caught up with me with missiles. I had it coming, however...Truly wonderful. Thank you...for writing this piece. Utopian poetry. |
| awannabewriter 2006-07-26 ch 1, | Its stunning. But I don't know if it is about love. |
| marshbar960 2006-07-25 ch 1, | i especially liked the last line. thanks for sharing. |
| Ailonwy 2006-07-22 ch 1, | Such agony portrayed here... I would've gave up at putting such a tragedy into words but you did an excellent job! Writers like you are few and far between. =) Thanks for the review, by the way. |
| Eve Hopeless 2006-07-18 ch 1, | Wow. This poem is just the kind that makes me think for nights upon nights just to understand. However, at this point in time -not having a single night to think- I am almost stunned. The way you wrote this is so open ended, yet, it keeps a mind on track. While I am not sure what image you were trying to produce in the lines, I came out with something that my mind never stays off of. Broken love. That confuses me the most, for you mentioned that your works usually never represent love. Therefore, I say that these words that you have chosen to share with us are truly astounding; it just gives off the feeling of pain and disappointment. Truly amazing the way my mind was able to wander within your lines. I really enjoyed it. As Always, Eve |