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| Talin 2008-11-23 ch 8,  | Ahh! I'm so excited, it's getting good. :DD |
| Twist Their Emotions 2008-11-12 ch 8,  | Interesting. I honestly have no idea where this story is going- and that's a good thing. :) |
| shellbell10 2008-11-12 ch 8, | Omg update I love ur story lol |
| January Skies 2008-11-10 ch 8, | Yay! Another chapter, I'm so happy. Awesome! Finally some action, I was wondering when something was going to happen! (Well besides the whole rape thing.) |
| Haley Hardcore 2008-11-10 ch 8, | great chapter and dude she got caught cant wait till the next chapter |
| Talin 2008-07-25 ch 7, | That was great. Omg I want to know what happens next~. What Xerxes would do. |
| violet-eyez 2008-07-23 ch 7, | huh...he said that he would hear her even when he wasn't there...some guardian...can't even protect her |
| Haley Hardcore 2008-07-23 ch 7, | awesome story so far and dude hope someone goes 2 help her |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2008-06-01 ch 6, | Wow. WOW! What a powerful ending, very well written, very emotion inspiring. I didn't blink at ALL since you said that Xerxes smirked. ACK! Wow, this is an amazing story (sorry for the late review) update soon! |
| violet-eyez 2008-05-28 ch 6, | so...why doesn't he just let them go after, and just erase their memory? |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2008-05-13 ch 5, | Wow. Very intense chapter filled with lots of drama and emotions. It was very well written, I really liked it! |
| Talin 2008-05-01 ch 6, | I love this story. It's so exciting~. Please update. Thank you. :D |
| Tecna 2008-04-06 ch 5, | You've FINALLY updated this story! It is brilliant! I love the chapter, it's so well written and detailed. The emotions running through Kaila felt so real and also I've noticed you changed your name along with the summary and I thought I was reading the wrong story first, but then I recognised it as the same one. Fab chapter, really enjpyed reading... I'm still getting over the fact that you've finally updated. You've made my day! (And night.) I have college tomorrow, holidays finished, so this was a pleasant surprise. Enjoyed it! Tecna ;) |
| Anon Amos 2007-12-24 ch 4, | VOAA Why don't you update? This is a cool story but I see that you haven't done anything with is for a long long time. Which is very sad since I like it so much MDM |
| Hiddengirl10 2007-10-08 ch 4, | you haven't updated in so long and I'm on a cliffhanger here, update soon? Please? Its a great story and I'm looking forward to reading more of it! |