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| Rose 2008-10-05 ch 15, anon. | abuseUPDATE PLZ!! Your story is really really good! Great pace and very interesting and creative! Didn't get bored once, normally I'm like how much longer is this? But with yours I was disappointed to see there wasn't any more! Great likeable characters and quite believable! |
| naivete chica 2008-08-19 ch 15,  | abusei enjoyed reading this, Samantha(well actually, you) have a unique sense of humour. i liked the part where she had to pretend to be his fiance.. lovely irony there. ;] my suggestion would be that samantha sounds more like a teenager than a mature 22year old at a marrying age. I do enjoy her sarcastic immaturity, but I think to strength her characterisation more maturity is needed. keep writing! =) |
| rosieroo 2008-06-18 ch 15, | abusewell, its past june 2nd! this is an awesome story, and i cant wait till you update next! also, you put that drew rated her a seven and a half, but earlier in the story he said she was a six and a half... just thought you should know! |
| dOrKy-GuRl03 2008-06-11 ch 15, | abuseomg its past june 2..when are you going to post the next chapter..i like it...lol...interesting..can't wait for scott's party...can't wait for the next one to be up...bye..bye... |
| aymmi 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuselove this story |
| OhSweetheart 2008-05-05 ch 15, | abuseI absolutely adore this story...but Drew really needs to get over the whole marrying Sam thing, if he really wanted to he could probably just pay the family back the money right? So stop bashing the twinkies! |
| SecretFeelings 2008-05-05 ch 15, | abuseokay, that was funny. XD |
| Icyglaze 2008-05-05 ch 15, | abuseHope you do well on exams!! :) I loved the chapter. :) |
| Kohlomere 2008-05-05 ch 15, | abuse"Who's side are you on?" That's just swell! E. |
| LethargicLove 2008-05-04 ch 15, | abuseWhat's up with the random two extra spaces between some paragraphs? I wouldn't have mentioned it normally, but it actually affected my reading, so I thought it could have bothered others as well. Ah, this was an awesome chapter. Sam should totally look amazing for Scott's party and knock both Scott and Drew off their feet, especially for giving her such a low score. The prostitute joke made me laugh for a good 5 minutes. I also enjoyed DJ's slinky story about the guy that she is so obviously fated to be with. Has the slinky-dude's name ever been mentioned though? Haha, I missed this story. There is just one glaring typo in the chapter that I thought you might want to learn about: “Let me guess, does it have to do with Drew and a car?” My nod turned into a glare as a triumphant smile spread across his face. "His" should be "her" since we're talking about DJ. Until chapter 16, then! |
| SecretFeelings 2008-05-04 ch 10, | abuseHAHAHA!! Go figure, XD I dunno it's suh a cliche line but funny all the same. |
| insanity-ward 2008-05-04 ch 15, | abuseLol! wicked awesome chapter! luved it! but i can't wait till when Drew finds out who Samantha really is, i hope Sam does smething to show how wrong Drew was about her! PLZ UPDATE SOON! =] |
| geminibaby6789 2008-05-04 ch 15, | abuseHey! You're back! Thanks for the chapter! Wow...that last scene was very interesting. Wonder what will happen at the party! Good luck on your exams and update soon! :) |
| kingrankar76 2008-05-04 ch 15, | abuseAh I love Sammie. Please make her shock him with her looks and outrageous behaviour. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update asap. |
| gulistanlik 2008-05-04 ch 15, | abuseAw does Drew feel lonely? Aw. Well that'll soon change. What I'd like to know is what he felt by 'Samantha's' little show. Muahahaha she is evil. But seriously, she rocks. =D gulistanlik |