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Mordred LeFay 2006-07-20 . chapter 1
I really like this one, Sam. I especially like how there is some very lyrical, sort of high-poetry phrasing mixed with everyday speech.

"I shall not transport you

to your salvation

or weekend getaways

when there is no place for me."

"Salvation" being a sort of thematic concept and "weekend getaways" more commonplace speech. Nice!
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