this just amazes me.. wonderfully written! onto favorites..

hearts this..

love~♥

It's good.
Very much like a song.
Well written!

I love this. Oh, the beautiful people. I especially like the note it ends on.

This is such a cool and different piece. I love the repetition - it's very effective. Great phrases and well-written...("we'll be our sweetest downfall") lovely. I'm adding to my c2

Sweet Virgin Mary Mother of Jesus I miss reading your poetry. It's been a while and I'm damn happy this was my welcome back to it. Now if you'll pardon me, I have to go read a few more before I take off for class...

wow, you used the figures just so perfectly...the style of using the icons were a bit cliched but i dont know how you pulled it off so well...and the thing on ghosts and then we'll sing is just so clever...you should be praised for this darling...


truly yours...

God I forgot how much I loved your work (haven't been on fp in about 6 months for lack of ideas, lack of inspiration, and lack of anything worth saying...but I broke that today)

And your work is just so raw, so full of emotion and so awe inspiring. I wish I could still write like that. Cherish this time. Only at one stage in our lives are any of us capable of writing with such emotion and feeling those emotions with such ferocity and recklessness.

Wonderful job. I will definately see more from you in the future.

And I like the joe dimaggio stanza

Fucking GORGEOUS, like a slap in the face-I was simply astonished at the amount of beauty in this peace-and yes, I'm stuttering out loud trying to figure out exactly how to describe how fucking amazing this poem made me feel. It's orgasmic-it rocks my insides (my heart in particular, my brain a close second) and you are fantastic!

Lovely, darling, an instant favorite. As are you.**added to list**

♥ Alice

♥ Alice

...and why did i not review this, when i'm clearly in love with it?

this.is.beautiful.

I love it. Especially, "you'll defend my nude sceneswhen i defend your anger managementwith bruises on my wrists & blood on our lipswe'll be our sweetest downfallwhen we hold hands & singlalalalalalala"gosh...perfect.

& when we're ghostswe'll hold hands & singlalalalalala-ah, perfection.

i like the sentimental side of overused icons, but here, not so much. gently tied with others to make it more unique

I quite enjoyed reading this, very nicely done. I love your poetry, you are a very good author.

This poem really appealed to be, especially the third verse. You give out some interesting thoughts and imagery in this lovely poem of yours.

EB

Well, that was just completely...BREATH-TAKING!

But seriously, it was great.