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| MoonsWynterWolf 2007-02-22 ch 1,   | very interesting indeed. a different time of poem. I like it! |
| Nobody's Hero 2006-08-31 ch 1, | Amazing...absolutely beautiful. rejection...prehaps a hint of self loathing?...hm...could be wrong...but i love it either way |
| Femme de Dieu 2006-08-30 ch 1, | Despite the format...this is categorically unimpeachable. It is so true that each gate that closes, each reflection off the glass, or whisper in the wind does develop us into who we are. It's really up to us to decide, though, whether it will embitter us or cause us to become more compassionate. I choose the latter. How 'bout you? Truly, Tourterelle |
| FunkyFlower17 2006-08-07 ch 1, | hmm, lol @ 'weird ** format'...i actually liked it :) its easier to read and helpful to imagine. short but awesome as always, ~mez~ |
| Arcane D. 2006-07-29 ch 1, | Interesting format, no doubt. Nicely written, short and sweet. I look forward to your next update. - ADD-san |
| simpleplan13 2006-07-28 ch 1, | I really like the font and the picture metaphor is awesome |
| ossining 2006-07-25 ch 1, | Wow, intense. I do like this poem a lot. "rejection framed in poetry." - Fantastic line. Great work! Keep writing! :) |
| breezy nostrils 2006-07-24 ch 1, | wow i still love the formatting of this poem. nice work definitely one of your most creative ones :P |
| Safira 2006-07-20 ch 1, | Marvellous vivid imagery and unique formatting, especially the "develop me"!I particularly favoured the lines, "rejection framed in poetry/a border a thousand miles deep". Autumn. |
| poetic abortion 2006-07-19 ch 1, | (awesome) weird ** format, though. ;) Love it. ~* Noelle |