I have this hanging on the back of my door. Ish amazing Mellon-Nin. Kudos! :-) Luffles...!

JACK! FANTASTIC! Yes, I know, I've already told you how flat-out amazing of a poet you are, but I thought you might like a nice little review as well.

wow. that was good. awesome rhyme and rhythm, flowed really well, excellent description. I kinda feel bad for the guy and yet I could relate to him at times. awesome work.