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Reviews For: Garden Of Dreams
SoSophia
2006-08-08
ch 1, 		abuse**, this poem is alot like Lily's story. I really like it, straight to the point!
chocohound
2006-07-21
ch 1, 		abuseI liked this poem a lot. "They were the most beautiful things She ever saw,So she cut them down And killed them all." - It's like a metaphor for some of the things we do in life.

Another great job!
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