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| With Rhyme and Reason 2006-07-19 ch 1,  | abuseOh, crazy. And cool. I like the last lines--very chilling. I don't know why, but this poem freaks me out a little bit... in a good way. :) Sometimes I get the feeling that the walls "know", you know? But I know that's not what you're getting at. Just for future reference: "it's"="it is" and "its"="thing belonging to 'it'". Other than that, no big problems. Well done. J |