ok ok ok... short it def better than nothing. lol :D just so we clear that up.

and i 4got to put about the last chap... i think i liked Lucio better as a ghost... i mean he wasn't as obssessed and crazy about the mafia, but i know that he was like that b4 he died. so u are portraying him right.

*takes deep breath* so... another gd chap... and wot i like about this story is that u get an insight to all the diff characters from the mafia ghost. lol

kat x

hey sry couldnt be bothered to sign in... even tho i just updated woo hoo! lol :D

*coughs* neways... really gd chap! no fair that u were on vacation tho... i hope u had a gd time, which was probably months ago... lol

omg! i feel bad for poor Jesse... bless... but thats the mafia for u lol. i keep reading this and i desperately want Joseph to meet Gemma lol but i know i know its before all that lol.

oh and a vivid imagination is such a gd thing to have! lol it rocks! :D i'm like that, and then i have to keep thinking about it otherwise i forget and then i get stressed coz most of the time its a reli gd idea. like i have a reli gd idea about a new story, but its just getting it down, and i dont wanna rush it so that i get to the gd ideas lol. (neways sry for rambling on then...)

so back to the chap! gd one cant wait to read more... in fact i mite just go... lol :D

kat x

Lol nice... and you're so completely INconspicuous in your author's note up top! Wow, I wonder who in the world you could possibly be talking to...*cough cough*lol It was a good chapter though...and I GUESS I'll read something else before you finish this, assuming that it has an ending at SOME point. But anyways, on with the review of your actual chapter. It was good. Short, like you said, but I guess you WERE KINDa...just a LITTLE bit pressured... :P lol I love the irony in her friend's outrageous theory that Gemma has mafia in her neighborhood... like THAT's at all reasonable... lol *wink wink* Okay, so continue...and I'll move on to an actual book now...instead of being the blond I am in nature...not realizing that this wasn't going anywhere...lol Okay ttyl hun
-Megan

hey! so sry i havent reviewed for ages! ive been so damned busy and coz my comp broke all the stories im reading are really long! lol :d i see u have started a new one too.

i promise i will catch up and havent forgotten u! :D

omg! i have to ask... why those numbers? (just been reading ur profile lol)

oh and it was gd to get a bit of background into Gemma... i feel bad for her bless. she gets a sweetie lol :D

kat x

Haha. i like Lucio...he has that stubborn, in-charge quality about him... Don't you think it's a little unreasonable that Luca would just listen to him though? I mean, I have 3 older brothers, and if I even tried to tell one of them to do something they'd either threaten me or ignore me...just a thought. Okay, on to the next chapter...oh wait...THERE IS NO NEXT CHAPTER! *gaspage* oh man...you gotta update...like now. Cuz I'm not reading the other until I read this whole thing...so if you want me to read those, you better finish this one :P lol Okay, well this is a really good story so far. Good job and good luck :) Ttyl

-Megan

La la la...I don't know why reading a story about the mafia isn't putting me in a dark mood lol...but I really like this story :)

and thank YOU for being awesome too :) lol

Uh oh *dun dun dun*

Lol. Sorry for the short reviews, but I'm probably just gonna read the rest of this tonight, so you'll just have to get over it :P lol jp...but they will all probably be short reviews.

Oh, and only one mistake that I saw...at the very end
"But that day made Joseph only hated the Mafia that much more."
It should be hate, not hated...just a typo. It's cool.

Um. Wow...she can talk to ghosts...fun fun X( lol Okay, well I guess I'll read the next chapter now...

I DID like this chapter though :)

O I like it...kind creepy though, in the sense that being in the mafia is so...idk CASUAL. lol But you have a really good idea here...and sorry that I haven't read your stuff before, seeing as you have mine...but I'm planning on it now, especially since it's good :) Okay, well ttyl
-Megan

uh this is good and all but what is this prequel leading up to?

i like this one. poor Lucio having to take care of all of them. :D i was glad to see you had updated. so... update as soon as you can. :D bye bye!

ok first of all... im so sry i havent started reading this until now! i'e been reli busy and altho thats no excuse, i hope u don't mind.

neways wow its kinda weird to read Lucio's pov wen he was alive, but i guess i'll get used to it! lol :D im reli looking 4ward to where ur gonna go with this story wiv it being the prequel, and the fact that we already know some of wot is bound to happen.

kat x

Its kinda sad that Lucio was so ambtious andf all of it was washed away with one gun shot. And stranger, that Luico as we see him in the mafia ghost was so...calm and...i dunno diffrent. i guess being dead does that to you...sorry for not reviewing in forever...

Yay! I finally got to review! lol poor Lucio didn't get anywhere in the mafia! well I don't think getting killed is getting anywhere, but I'm not in the mafia. :D i really liked this chapter. Gianna's one of my favorites... but i think you know that already. lol. always great to hear from her. :D update this soon!