You use imagery so well, it brings a smile to my face. :) I can just imagine this happening; feel the atmosphere. I especially am enamored with the last two lines...*sigh* They make me so despondent...

stunning.

perfect.

I wouldnt change a thing.

very vivid. that last line stayed with me-excellent job.

some very well written imagery. i like how the word 'memory' stood out. good work

keep writing

Wow, another incredible poem choker!

Incredibly haunting - i actually got chills reading this one ^_^as usual, your poety takes my breath away - way to go on another gem XD