such very pretty imagery, you should be proud of this sparkling little piece. ~*

So far I have read all of your Jorios. I really like the idea behind them all. You put a lot of detail into every one, and ,even though it is only four short poem sentences, you paint beautiful pictures with the words. Please keep writing!

This kind of makes me want to smile... :)

what a beautiful image! each word added to the beauty of the intire poem. wow! amazing job! thanks for posting this colorful piece of art!

What a wonderful jorio again! The imagery here is just great. Well done.

This is very pretty! I love the picture I get from it. And I have a love affair with stars it seems, so that makes me love it even more!

Keep writing!