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| teenfiction2007 2006-09-14 ch 1,   | I like it but i thought that it should have had a more realistic title that was more appropriate to what was going on in the poem. |
| leon Hart87 2006-07-22 ch 1, | Wow very deep are you not really susan's friend J/c |
| Peppa 2006-07-19 ch 1, | "Tastes the claws from the stores;Society’s flavor in my mouth," i love those lines. Great poem, i think it can be interpreted a bunch of different ways! |
| awannabewriter 2006-07-19 ch 1, | Deep and dark. A little bit eerie. I like. I like. |