 xxXNightsareDaysXxx 2009-10-08 . chapter 10It's too bad that you've stopped updating this story...It's great...!! |
 karinhate 2009-08-31 . chapter 10what made him change so mush and what does he have aganist her and she is supposed to be a spy wh does she act like she has no clue no how to be one? how is she supposed to kidnapp he and does he now that she is after him? so many questions so littel ansers so plZ update soon |
 SunlitSky 2009-08-05 . chapter 10I was really enjoying this story until its sudden end. It looks like you haven't updated in a while, so I can only assume its discontinued? That makes me sad, your story was really brightening my day. Tess's crazy antics would make me laugh and the entire absurdity of Cane's personality and all the drama made it all the more fun. Even though the plot line isn't the most original the story still seemed fresh and kept my interest. I wish that there was more of Tess's "spy" incorporated though, because she almost seems out of character. Missing hidden cameras, allowing Cade to sneak up on her etc seems odd considering her background... But at any rate, I loved this story and wish you would continue it. Even if you don't though I wish you the best of luck as a writer- you seem to have a lot of potential. :) |
 UrFaveFreek 2008-12-25 . chapter 1 Tess Tyler? Jack camprock much? |
 ScArLeT kNight 2008-11-20 . chapter 10I love your plot...it has this certain twist. I hope you update soon! haha! I love Tess very much. She has this kind of fire in her . ahahaha...Can I have cade? I promise to take real good care of him haha...=) |
 Katsumi-kun 2008-09-24 . chapter 10Wow I just get this feeling that Cade totally knows or knows that SOME ONE is spying on the household at least when he found the tracker. Also maybe he turned all meanish because opening up would be getting more vulnerable and stuff. I also like Tristan, he seems similar to Quinn lee in the whole psychiatrist department, but quiet and observant. |
 Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2008-09-04 . chapter 10I like it. Update? It happens to be the funniest story I've read in a long time. |
 FerretsRevolution 2008-08-12 . chapter 10Wow, in this chapter, it truly looks like cade knows what tess is up 2...DUM DUM DUM! Great story, btw. I like how wierd and random tess is, I also like how you keep the personality of the characters consistent, how they stay in their own element, and when they do drift, they drift smoothly...(do u get what im saying, or does this look like giberish to u)...What I mean is, (im not saying ur characters are static) that they keep the same personality, unlike characters in other stories, where in just one chapter, they go from "**, dont touch me!" to "Would you like some homemade chocolate chip cookies -insert big sweet smile-"...
BIG FAN, UPDATE SOON!
-kemi |
 DMLpacker 2008-06-17 . chapter 10I hope you still plan on continuing this story. It's so clever and humorous! |
 rosieroo 2008-05-23 . chapter 10this is really good! please update soon!
cade is such an ice block!! is he ever gonna melt?? |
 Weirderest 2008-05-15 . chapter 2"But then again, I wasn’t one of those typical cold-blooded assassins that everyone saw in movies these days. Honestly, who said assassins couldn’t be cheerful and cheeky? It was all due to stereotypes."
Wicked line. Now i'm going to go read the rest of this, just had to tell you how cool it was. Stupid stereoypes. |
 SapphireEyes16 2008-03-25 . chapter 2luv the story, update soon! |
 centenarian 2008-03-23 . chapter 10Haha, this story is so funny. Made me laugh a lot and Tyler, she's hilarious. I dunno but sometimes, I really doubt that she's an assassin. I mean, she's pretty messed up sometimes. Alright, anyways, I hope you update soon. Last time you updated was a few months ago so...please? I like this story. Good luck! |
 gulistanlik 2008-02-11 . chapter 10Oh wow! This is a interesting fic. I really am wondering how this is going to end. I mean Tess is the bad guy in this. I wonder if she's going to quit her job or something or change to the good side or something's going to happen to Cade's father or...I dunno. I've got so many ideas whizzing around in my mind. I just don't know which is remotely close to the actual plot.
Keep up the good work! I really do hope this fic is being continued, it's really nice and very amusing! hehe!
gulistanlik |
 SuperCUTEJensen 2007-12-05 . chapter 10nice story...I( like it so far...I like Cade and Tess..I hope to see them together...hope you update soon |