I really appreciate the fact that you don't go into detailed descriptions of the characters' appearances as soon as they're introduced. Especially Tess as it's written in her P.O.V and I've noticed that in many other stories the protagonist describes herself at length. Then goes on to everyone else.

I'm re-reading the story for the fourth time. If it's possible and isn't too much trouble, please update soon? I understand if you have writer's block. I'm just curious to see how long Tess's crush is one-sided.

Your story is absolutely amazing! It's not the typical love story. Tess still has hatred towards Cartier ad is still really focused on the errand. Like Tess, I also assumed that Cartier would be that rich, arrogant playboy that basked in the attention, but instead, he defies that stereotype, surprising both Tess and me at the same time. One of the reasons why I absolutely love this story is because of the emotional connection I have to Tess. Both her and I stereotyped him and are continuously perplexed when her defies our assumptions. This story is beautifully written. Please update soon!

What an amazing story I can not wait until you update it is absolutely wonderful please do continue soon.

This chapter is still amazing.(this has probably been like the third time i've read it) I'm still so anxious to know how they are going to survive Cartier finding out that she's an assassin. But it might be awhile until that happens. 3 the story. oh and i'm also curious to know why ash lives in his house. it's kind of weird

AAAHHH!This story is so fun to read! Please update soon!

Wow. This story rocks!

But, I must say, Cartier's attitude has changed dramatically. I know that's what happens when you get close to someone you weren't close before, but, I do hope Aven isn't being a prick just because he likes Tess. It seems probable...

XOXO

I love this story! It is so interesting and I'm waiting on the next chapter. I felt that this was a big cliffhanger. I love how the chapters are long, but PLEASE update sooner.

I can't believe ive only just gotten into this story! It's friggin BRILLAINT!

Update soon :)

xoxo

Loooooove it.:) Unfortunately I have a friend over right now (unfortunately because I haven't been real friends with her since kindergarten but our moms are BFFs and they went out) so I can't read the rest right now, but I'll be back! :)

FINALLY! YOU UPDATED!

*happy dance*

I love love love chapter 8 and 9!

And the fight between Aven and Tess is gonna be epic!

I'm loving Cartier and Tess interaction more and more...

I am wondering if you will make this into a rated M story. This is actually one those stories that I really keep under my radar. I absolutely adore this. Please dont drop this story and I can only pray that this won\t be plagarized because it is so good. I am waiting for the next chapter already

This story is fantastic. Although this has been done before a few times, you really pulled it off in a wonderful way. My sister asked me for the computer a few hours ago and I said, "NO GET AWAY I'M READING." Getting yelled at was worth it, I assure you.

Well done, Writer. Well done.

I can't decide what's better, the feud between Aven and Tess or the budding romance between Tess and Cartier. All I know is that I love both and you're doing a wonderful job of upkeeping both! I can't wait to see how this all turns out and what Tess will wear to the Halloween party.

That was so amusing! I read like half the dialogue aloud because it was fun and I was really getting into it. I feel bad for Cartier because either he's gonna be dead or really hurt by Tess's betrayal. I can't really remember but I think in one of the earlier chapters it was said that the agency they were working for didn't give them all the info they needed, like they left stuff out. So somewhere in the back of mind, I'm thinking like the agency is gonna betray them and then Tess needs to get out and stuff. (You don't need to respond to this pondering, I just wanted to tell you my train of thought)

-Have a nice day :)