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| Laughing In the Night 2008-09-04 ch 10,  | abuseI like it. Update? It happens to be the funniest story I've read in a long time. |
| qtkemi 2008-08-12 ch 10, | abuseWow, in this chapter, it truly looks like cade knows what tess is up 2...DUM DUM DUM! Great story, btw. I like how wierd and random tess is, I also like how you keep the personality of the characters consistent, how they stay in their own element, and when they do drift, they drift smoothly...(do u get what im saying, or does this look like giberish to u)...What I mean is, (im not saying ur characters are static) that they keep the same personality, unlike characters in other stories, where in just one chapter, they go from "**, dont touch me!" to "Would you like some homemade chocolate chip cookies -insert big sweet smile-"... BIG FAN, UPDATE SOON! -kemi |
| lilylupin7 2008-06-17 ch 10, | abuseI hope you still plan on continuing this story. It's so clever and humorous! |
| rosieroo 2008-05-23 ch 10, | abusethis is really good! please update soon! cade is such an ice block!! is he ever gonna melt?? |
| Weirderest 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuse"But then again, I wasn’t one of those typical cold-blooded assassins that everyone saw in movies these days. Honestly, who said assassins couldn’t be cheerful and cheeky? It was all due to stereotypes." Wicked line. Now i'm going to go read the rest of this, just had to tell you how cool it was. Stupid stereoypes. |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-03-25 ch 2, | abuseluv the story, update soon! |
| centenarian 2008-03-23 ch 10, | abuseHaha, this story is so funny. Made me laugh a lot and Tyler, she's hilarious. I dunno but sometimes, I really doubt that she's an assassin. I mean, she's pretty messed up sometimes. Alright, anyways, I hope you update soon. Last time you updated was a few months ago so...please? I like this story. Good luck! |
| gulistanlik 2008-02-11 ch 10, | abuseOh wow! This is a interesting fic. I really am wondering how this is going to end. I mean Tess is the bad guy in this. I wonder if she's going to quit her job or something or change to the good side or something's going to happen to Cade's father or...I dunno. I've got so many ideas whizzing around in my mind. I just don't know which is remotely close to the actual plot. Keep up the good work! I really do hope this fic is being continued, it's really nice and very amusing! hehe! gulistanlik |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-12-05 ch 10, | abusenice story...I( like it so far...I like Cade and Tess..I hope to see them together...hope you update soon |
| Proven.Guilty 2007-09-17 ch 10, | abuseAww i love Tess and Cade |
| RoseLife 2007-09-09 ch 10, | abuseYAY! an update!! wait... when did you post this? oh well! IM LOVING IT! its totally awsome! haha loved the bit at the end of this chappie XD UPDATE SOON, OR I MAY RESULT TO...-pause for dramatic effect- POTATOE THROWING! haha! yes i know i am crazy! it was the first word(s) that popped into my head! but be warned!! i have potatoes, and i am NOT afraid to use them! =P SO UPDATE SOON! XD ~RL~ |
| soda.pop.fairy 2007-09-04 ch 10, | abuseAwesome story ; ) |
| PeterMoore 2007-09-02 ch 10, | abuseplease update soon. such a good story. |
| menother 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseThis story is AMAZING! I just found it today and am eagerly waiting for more-although I know it will take a while to update. The plot for this is unique-a very interesting way to kidnap a person! |
| SapphireEyes16 2007-08-31 ch 10, | abuseaero fell in love with cade! well thatz a revelation, update soon |