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| QueenVixta 2007-01-20 ch 1,  | abuseGood piece. A lot of people will be able to relate to this. I like it a lot, I just feel the ending is a little too abrupt. Good work though, [Vikki] |
| Freddie of Albion 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI've been away from writing as you probably noticed. It's great to come back and see you're still on top form...well done! |
| Leaving Here 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseeh, this is really cool.i love how you write.~Liz |
| i am pookie 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abusehaha! i really liked this one as well. how common is it for girls (people) to only notice the imperfections (i am so GUILTY of that!) and just focus on them? you made that clear. but i love the ending line: 'so i could watch'. it leaves me thinking 'watch WHAT?'--but i just add on to the piece--watch your life grow up around you? watch how everything falls in place because you know yourself, what you want and it isn't just bones anymore, but you. because you know your body--the mind of it. haha, i just really enjoyed it. |