|Reviews for Wish|
| LuckyCharm.698 7/3/07 . chapter 1
Strong opinion and idea but the rhythms kind of off. i enjoyed it though!
| simpleplan13 8/4/06 . chapter 1
I like a lot of parts of this, but I dont think it flows well together.. the wish thing & the mother thing dont relaly go together in my mind.. adn the ending about being beautifully ugly is amazing but comes out of nowhere... I think the different parts need more of a easing into them.. or maybe make them into separate pieces? ::Shrug:: jsut my opinion.. I do really like it though...