I like the whole Ill love her for.. that part was sad and touching... I also love that last line.. great piece

I like this a lot. It has many twists to it, which I love about poetry. You seem to have mastered the way poetry can be so personal to everyone.

Oh, and Keeping You A Secret is the BEST BOOK EVER.

-Xero

And again. It's a really beautiful poem. It's still pretty sad, though, you don't want to love her, but you do anyways because heart and soul won't let you get over it. Yeah...i know that feels. Totally sucks.

but your poem rocks i applaud thee. good job and keep writing.

i liked this, it was really good