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| alyssa, the writer of this ... 2006-07-20 ch 1,  | Okay, i know its wrong to review your own story, but since this is a one chapter story i could not find anyother way to striahgten heathers messed up mind up. so this isnt really a review, for i am not commenting on a story.kk, 1) Heather, some things in the story had to be changed becuase i could not remember ever fact. such as the student beign large, though lauren isnt in reality large, i thought it would make more sense if she was, for i forgot how i lost harry seeing since i held on to htat little guy for dear life! 2) i have forgiven lauren, quiet some time ago, but i was to lazy to explain that in the story, so instead, i made it plain and simple, the student was never forgiven. so, i hope this clears things up, for lauren really isnt a bad person, and i would feel horrible if people thought so! |
| LilyFinn 2006-07-19 ch 1,  | u...r...so...retarded! alyssa, ur story stinks like mulch (haha! i luv arty fowl!)! ur so mean, holding a grudge against lauren yanosko even though she did nothing wrong!! ur fingers were 2 slippery 2 hold on2 harry!! & u r most definitely not a genius. that title is reserved 4 1 person & that's ME ^_^ ...im mad @ u...writing a story when u could've been emailing me...MEANIE! & i DO NOT HAVE A MESSED UP MIND! also, i have heard the expression curiosity killed the cat...& u know what?? satisfaction brought it back!! ^_^ beat that, my o-so-wonderfully-grammar-challenged-master! |
| rachael ((alyssas BEST FRIE... 2006-07-19 ch 1, | HAHE I DEMAND A STORY INCLUDING ME! DIE HEATHER! i mean...hi heather. i luff you. and the story...was...good. but do you know how much better it would have been if I WAS IN IT? *SOBSOBSOB* I HAVE GOOD BABYSITTING SKILLS |