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| Von-Pants 2008-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseThe man is so sane, yet he's in an asylum. (Not the first time this has happened). I like the idea of there being seven doors, seven keys, seven words. I'm also curious as to what would happen if he couldn't resist saying one of the key sentences. But this is a very original idea, soundly written and intriguing. Fave. |
| hbk8998 2006-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseIntriguing, there was enough detail to keep the reader interested, but enough left out to allow some leeway. The whole story itself while at first seemed like a incoherent ramble turned into a... a reqarding adventure through the mind of the insane...or not so insane. |
| Kukoc 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseAmazing story, I wish he got to use the key thing though |
| korg_master 2006-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...that was really good. I mean...really good. Really, REALLY good. I like the idea behind it, and I think it makes a really good one-shot. I suppose it would be hard to make this into a story, at least for me. Bravo. Very good. |