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| The Gentle Troubadour 2006-07-25 ch 1,  | abuseMy gracious this is incredible! I can almost hear thecrash of thunder in the background as I read this! Your talents are far-flung and exceptional...don't ever stop writing! I really believe that you could get this one in particular published. It's really, really, really amazing. |
| Ashelin 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty cool. I totally know that feeling, I live in the northwest and get storms like that all the time. To me they are kinda like a suger high. They go and go and then they crash. Great poem! |
| Cowgirl4Christ 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseAll I can say is: wow. I could see the storm and hear the wind. Great, awesome job! And I liked the last lines too. They were really short, but they were really profound. You should send some of your poems to poetry.com, it's a poetry contest. |
| DemonicDestiny 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseThe last line confuses me a bit, but I still liked the poem. you discribed everything well. |