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| Edgar Wellington 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is stream of consciousness. This is beautiful, hard, real...this is life. This is less poetic than your usual, more of a story, more like I am sitting on your porch listening to you rant. There is something so inviting about it. Its like a confession and a statement and a plea for self determination. You have a way of making the reader both your equal and your admirer. What is it? equal because you expose flaws and "speak" in such a familiar voice..admiration because your observations make the reader stop and think...how do you get away with so much contradiction? I know its the nature of life... I like reading your words very much! Thanks for sharing them. |