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| Devin Brines 2006-11-23 ch 1,  | abuseSome free men are imprisoned by greed. |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abusei like this, the repetition is used in good effect and it flows well, the short lines are good. I particularly like lines 4-8 ~Bex |
| an-entraced-pyromaniac 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abusethats really good |
| nadorj 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one and i like the title too!! |
| Roger Bardheart the Brave 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuselike Macbeth's wife's blood stained hands you have shown the similar guilt of the nation. the problem being that 'out damned spot, out i say!' doesn't work, it doesn't wash away... |
| tesa131313 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseit's a cute poem |
| poemkitten7 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, very powerfully written. Great job. Keep it up!! ~Sara |